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  • rageoffire
    rageoffire8mth
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    why does it say he is 11, will we get an explanation for that.

    Age: 11/12
    The Primordial Record
    Fantasy · BRICKTRADER
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  • rageoffire
    rageoffire10mth
    Commented

    This whole chapter is like , since i know elementary maths perfectly i can blaze through calculas. It just feels incredibly stupid. So if he has foundation in fist techniques he can master all fist techniques. Just stupid.

    Ch 5 Blazing Sun Body Tempering Art, Five Divine Fists
    Cultivation: I Can Add Descriptors To My Body
    Eastern · Heartless
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  • rageoffire
    rageoffire11mth
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    come on man he was working towards buying the potion for 2 years but still doesn't know the price. and you should give more context about the general value of cores of different ranks first instead of just rushing forward. It's really rushed chapters at first. U didn't write important stuff but wrote about him buying the potion. who cares about his interaction. you can develop your character later. You should have thought about what you were going to write or read some similar stories so you would have known not to make mistakes. Why would everyone know about him man. Do you think they do anything to do. If they are learning how to fight. all academy novels have the same stereotypes. Just first read some other novels so you would know what not write

    Ch 3 Invisibility Potion
    Necromancer Of The Shadows
    Fantasy · Zero_writer
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  • rageoffire
    rageoffire11mth
    Posted

    shitty story. he says divine skills and gives them 10 sec cooldown. first time I am seeing someone who doesn't even know how to write .

    Online Game: You Call Him A Newbie?
    Games · I'm Nine Barrel
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  • rageoffire
    rageoffire1yr
    Replied to ArbitraryEnnui

    My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion is much better. It atleast proper world building. Here author just gives mc problems and solves them by giving him divine ability or cultivation technique specifically for it. Hong meng Sutra for example it says its a primordial scripture but it's ability is to hide cultivation.

    Cultivating In Secret Beside A Demoness
    Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
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  • rageoffire
    rageoffire1yr
    Commented

    Story was going good and you just had to make him say that. It's really irritating and I don't know why you think people like it. It's not. So many books I stop reading because of things like that.

    Ch 2 Chapter 1 - Opportunity
    Eternal Emerald Dragon
    Eastern · mythosarcana
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