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Zeikan1yrPostedThis novel is one of the best VRMMORPG novels out there and one of my favourites. The main character Yuan is dense and pure because of his condition and minimum interaction with society. But I guess thats reasonable over an edgy and cringe MC. But Character Development is quite slow compared to the story's overall pacing and I hope it develops. Characters are well designed for each situation and helps keep the story going at a decent flow. (with the occasional face slapping ofc XD) The Background of both the game and real world is well designed, but infomation on the Nine Heavens isn't fully revealed even from where Im at (Im at Chapter 444) and I hope it keeps growing without affecting the overall flow of the story. The Writing is very good with little to no grammatical and spelling errors helping with the consistent immersion. But during some instances the scenery was briefly described which didn't help me fully picture the place in which the situation was going on. The novel is very awesome overall and I would recommend anyone interested in reading Eastern Fantasyor Video Games to give this a try! I would also like to give respect to the author for writing such a novel! Keep up the good work Author! P.S. This is my first ever review if you see any mistakes please point them out and thank you for your time reading up to this point!
- Zeikan1yrCommentedCh 33 Past memories?
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Finally! A Sacred Number!
Heavenly War of Immortals and Gods - Zeikan2yrCommentedHe was about to consume a delicious stuffed blinker when something unexpected happened. His perfect solitude was interrupted by three known individuals approaching his table. Lith stopped them before they could sit down.
- Zeikan2yrReplied to Ryn_Roo
damn now that's some deep stuff
"I knew it! This should be the fourth law of thermodynamics: whenever a body and soap meet, a parcel arrives!" - Zeikan2yrReplied to Corona_beerus
why did I see this and the dude about Nutella pls just stop don't go there
Lith then took the most magnificent, comfortable dump since his rebirth. That moment alone made every hardship he experienced since coming into the academy fade away like a bad dream. - Zeikan2yrReplied to Starborn
lol man I totally forgot about him the moment Manohar came out đ đ¤Ł
Based on his understanding, it was time for a little shopping spree. - Zeikan2yrCommented
ayo wtf? Well.. .That was random af
Diluc looked at Yomite, and Yomite stared back at him. A few moments of silence had passed before Diluc spoke again, "Kaeya, did you multiply?" - Zeikan2yrReplied to Uruuru
author you should have done that part this way it's better I think.....?
"Who goes there!? Halt!" The Knights aimed their swords towards the two unknown people, "Don't move any further! Show us proof of identification, or else we won't let you through!" - Zeikan2yrReplied to Sagely_pervert
same thought I had ngl
A sharp thorn pierced my chest in an instant and blood spurted onto Silvie's shirt.