Re: mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............................................

apart from some inconsistencies, this is acceptable. The protagonist doesn't seem to be very cold or manipulative, and also doesn't seem to be very Op from the start. The pace is a little slow for my taste, but ok. I would like more chapters with more information, instead of always talking about just alchemy.