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XtrmeMisfit1mthCommented"Dear author, could you consider relocating the A/N to the end of the chapter and perhaps adding a symbol to signify which paragraph it corresponds to? While I adore the story, these side notes tend to disrupt the flow for me. Nonetheless, I'm committed to continuing reading. Yours is one of the few fanfics I've come across that truly captivates me. Keep up the excellent work!"
Ch 11 C11 Trials of Darth ***** (1/2)- XtrmeMisfit1mthCommented
"Dear author, could you consider relocating the A/N to the end of the chapter and perhaps adding a symbol to signify which paragraph it corresponds to? While I adore the story, these side notes tend to disrupt the flow for me. Nonetheless, I'm committed to continuing reading. Yours is one of the few fanfics I've come across that truly captivates me. Keep up the excellent work!"
(A/N: Just a reminder, no one but him can hear these whispers. Any trial that uses his personal information will be kept as an illusion that only he sees or hears, so none of his secrets will be revealed. I know most readers don't like that, and truthfully neither do I.) - XtrmeMisfit2mthCommentedCh 74 Protocol: Juggernaut(3)
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It is a disease that causes scarring (fibrosis) of the lungs. The word "idiopathic" means it has no known cause. Scarring causes stiffness in the lungs and makes it difficult to breathe. Lung damage from IPF is irreversible and progressive, meaning it gets worse over time.
For many, Dash's personality might seem boring, but none of the fools who could opine knew his situation. The illness tormenting him was called idiopathic pulmonary fibrosis, and theoretically, he should be wearing a mask to help him breathe, but he secretly took it off whenever he could. - XtrmeMisfit5mthCommentedCh 48 Eyes That Do Not See, But Rage.
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I feel like using the term stabbed or punctured or even poked would be better. Just my opinion.
Suddenly the syringe jumped at him and bit him. - XtrmeMisfit5mthCommented
Catch
"My goodness, this is the fifth floor. Did you caught me in mid air and jumped from over there to here?" - XtrmeMisfit6mthCommented
Correction kagune
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Ahh I like the twist with the jaguar from Tokyo ghoul.
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Finnaly a author who understands.
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I like this concept
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Looks like I found nice fanfic to add to my top reading list.
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Another great chapter. That was unexpected but in a good way thanks author San.
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Another good chapter!
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Another great chapter keep it up author San.
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Great start! Let’s see what in store for this fanfic. First fanfic or Naruto where their is triplets. Seems a bit of fresh air.
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So bee is a male after all. Pheww close one.
He'd seen these things in some videos he'd watched on the internet, and he'd seen that humans had a lot of fun with them, so he'd been willing to try. - XtrmeMisfit8mthCommentedCh 8 Gilgamesh's Strength
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*prompting
Instead of just entering unannounced, I stopped by the door and made my presence known which quickly alerted the security bot, printing him to report my identity to its creators.