I like this story! So interesting

Even though Bai thought of poisoning him she was really worried for him when it really happened. This makes me appreciate her even more because she wouldn't have done it for real, she really is a good person

I think you are right, the relationship between Sanno and Sanya is really complicated but also interesting! I think Leo should trust Lia more and reveal her his secret... And also his feelings

I liked the story but I would like to read more about Lia and Aesop!

I like the story but there are continuous changes in the times of verbs, it's a bit stange to read when some phrases are written in past simple and other in present simple. Is it a traduction mistake or just the style of the author? I really like the story though