Strange12Voices
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gonna be honest rarely read novels outside of fanfic's cause their free to read, but this one got the potential it lacks grammar, but has a lot of details given to the characters analysis of his surroundings, the character feels more alive and not robotic in his actions as they are explained through his thinking of inner monologue. I recommend making the lines shorter as they can be tedious to read when they are too long also more "," would be needed and sometimes word's are repeating which makes it feel less appealing while reading in rest the novel has high potential it's an unusual take on the blindness of the mc nd his struggles to use the senses and figure things out. if this novel has no system and Harem I will support it as I think it's still a better take on a non human mc than that one rip off of tensura about a guy who became a mimic.
"casualties of war"
womp womp?
think of it this way, if you leaved in a society that normalises and teaches you about this type of actions being normal from your birth, will you have the same mentality and views on it as you have now?
I understand your frustration with the horrific atrocities committed like beheading children but that is mainly the human perspective and dislike/disapproval of other member's of your spiecie, and your presant culture and views.
ok then what about those same people having the responsibility of choosing their leaders and if they chose to allow their leader's to do as they please that dose make them guilty, their non action was one of the causes, they shouldn't cower in fear of their own leader's and choose to get along just so they were not prosecuted as most think only about their lives.
what I am saying isn't the fact that there is no good and evil what I'm saying is that there is no innocent
intimate dosent exactly mean segs or erotic more like how should I say " body contact "
people underestimate how kind hearted Issei s behind his perverting self
he would be proud of this little nuisance
I wouldn't say humans we're different during the early days of unga bunga
there is no concept of innocent in nature the reality is weak get killed by strong if we go by the concept of innocent all the animals, insects we killed in order to survive or to build something would make us automatically guilty and evil but then you realize that if we didn't do it others would've took the opportunity to dominate us
no more like buff type that increases ones actions