Manage your pronounce correctly, and don't add another whole info about their looks.

Drop some basic info dude, I can't get immersed in your novel

He needs a smartphone to solve 7 years child questions papers😂😂😂😂😂😂👍

Ranking names of the mages need to be simple or easy to pronounce, so readers can remember it. And this chapter sort of feels like a monologue to me which wouldn't draw readers into novel story or world. You can take it as a advice or ignore it, its your novel anyway.

Why does it look like I'm reading a cringe Chinese novel, after reading this chapter

You are making him lose his character

yep that's what Google told me that beldum couldn't learn any moves other than tackle in his base form or maybe in some other generation i didn't go into deeper research. and about beldum evolving into Metang at 13, I know beldum evolves after reaching level 20 after someone pointed it out before you but i didn't change it. and about me not knowing about Pokemon, you are right about that as i have only watched Kanto reign anime and haven't played any game and whatever i have written is based is based after searching on Google except level system. if 7 and half months or 8 months is few months than sure , you can find other fanfics and play Pokemon games if you are that strict about rules.

Any suggestions on which pokeball he should use? I will change it after doing appropriate research on Pokeballs 👍🍺

thanks for pointing it out 👍🍺

i have only watched Pokemon anime of Kanto reign when I was a kid and haven't played any of its games so i don't even know there was level system in it until yesterday and i thought it was all fanfic think so i made it up as i see fit as you can see in this chapter 😅😅

If you find any problem please do tell , so that I correct it 👍🍺

Don't know, i just searched it on Google and copied it

done 👍 thanks for pointing it out🍺

CYNTHIA

I will upload my upcoming chapters on fanfic section, you can check it there

SERENA

Like in alternate universe? I will do that after i get my research done on Pokemon tomorrow, as you can see i started this novel just on a whim after reading all those fanfictions 😂

Just installed, will try that from the next chapter 👍👍

Serena

Cynthia