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Magnus_Andersen7mthCommentedCh 504 504: One step closer to the end- Magnus_Andersen7mthPosted
the book is good and all, but the story dossent make any sense. sen and his entire race is hunted down, for no reason. the witch or whatever, says she needed him to stop the shadow at a later age hence why she killed him so she could bring him back as a human. but the shadow would never have been a thing if they haddent hunted down the dragons in the first place. there is absolutly no reason for him to help the humans
- Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
no. just no.
Exiting the valley, he proceeded to ascend the slopes of a mountain. There, Han Sen stumbled across a mutant creature he could hunt. From a cliffside wall hung a large beehive. The occupants of the hive were bigger than average bees, approximately the size of pigeons. - Magnus_Andersen7mthReplied to Eternal_Crusader
its the other participants speaking, not his family
"Well after Damien, he is the second hero material of our hero. He can't be defeated. Only a fool would dare to challenge him." - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
that impliess roy and his companions arent humans, instead try removing "also"or something like every "other" human.
From within the black portal, ominous silhouettes emerged, riding on the backs of vast, imposing bats. Chaos followers and crimson mages descended, a malevolent horde raining from the sky. Their menacing attention swept across the area, focusing not only on Roy and his companions but also on every human within the Everlasting Hollows. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
this is the first time introducing it, you cant say "that" gateway, because that impliess that we know it allready
A vortex spiraled into existence above, tendrils of black energy unfurling from its center. It was no ordinary portal, but "That" gateway that bridged the Nether Realm, the dominion of Death, with the continent of the Far West. The nether realm was also the lair of Chaos! - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
nice lyria is so much better than lyra
Next up were Amelia, Julian, Lyria, and Syndra. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
what kinda freakshow is she
Her hair, a mesmerizing crown of sapphire, flowed like a waterfall, casting glimmers of blue light as it moved. Her eyes, a perfect mirror of her azure locks, were a dazzling proof of her beauty. The contours of her face shaped a perfect heart, its symmetry enhancing her already hypnotic allure. The sun hit her brown skin, casting a radiant glow that made her seem as if she were crafted from gold. - Magnus_Andersen7mthReplied to MrAconter
patience friend
Bro's charm and charisma were in full force, causing girls to fall head over heels for him left and right. His game was simply too good to resist! - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommentedNot only that, but the Female Siren had also been longing to conceive children with Roy and yearned for his virility. Driven by these desires, she wasted no time in utilizing her bewitching charm, which surpassed ten thousand, to effortlessly seduce him.
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4th time reading this book and i only now realize how intricate this plot is
The mysterious being replied, "The explanation is too complex to delve into right now. But I can guide you to where you can find the answers. Go to the awakening platform of the empire to awaken. We will meet face to face then." It said as the voice died out and the amulet stopped vibrating. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
plot twist he was night's woman in his first life
B: He was someone important to Night in his first life. Otherwise, the gods wouldn't have used him as bait. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
about a 159 meter to the europeans
At their highest point, the walls of Constantine County rose to over 477 feet, a formidable barrier that was designed to protect the county from any potential threats. They were so high that even the most skilled aura master would find it nearly impossible to scale them. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
ohh yeah its her, def
"Since they have failed to bring you to me, I will come for you myself, my love!" the mysterious entity said to Roy in a passionate tone. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
i think its the girl alkheim put inside that eternal coffin or whatever its called to save her life.
"You aren't abandoning me again! I won't let you leave my side!" the feminine voice of an unknown person shrieked. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
to those confused, its : put up defence
The sword was so fast that it reached its target in the blink of an eye. The hobgoblin didn't have any time to react or out up dedense before his flesh was penetrated by the aura sword, its blade sinking into its chest and coming out of its back, pinning it to the wall like a grotesque insect on display. Even the holy son didn't have it as bad as the hobgoblin. - Magnus_Andersen7mthReplied to Chris_StinsonEven a skilled warrior like her had been caught off-guard by the goblin's insidious attack. Thankfully, Roy's extraordinary senses had enabled him to spot the danger in time, or else she would have met her maker.
- Magnus_Andersen7mthReplied to voice_of_madness
ahh yes, the goblin slayer has arived
『You have earned the *Annihilator of Goblins" title!』 - Magnus_Andersen7mthReplied to Chris_Stinson
they have only been fighting large hordes of mosters and auramosters? she is still super strong and very skilled compared to other weapon masters, you are comparing her to roy(half dragon, with a cheat like system) and aura mosters who is a whole realm above her...dont complain so much about your own lack of understanding
Even a skilled warrior like her had been caught off-guard by the goblin's insidious attack. Thankfully, Roy's extraordinary senses had enabled him to spot the danger in time, or else she would have met her maker. - Magnus_Andersen7mthCommented
and now its like 16-18 inches after the bloodline improvements
His wife was beautiful; her beauty was otherwordly. No one in the world could compare to her in terms of beauty. But Delilah, although not as beautiful as the female siren, was like the forbidden fruit. Even the forefathers would fail to resist such temptation, and Roy was just a young man with a healthy body. How could he possibly not have any thoughts about her? He had met her before his Fated, liked her before his Fated, and even kissed and embraced her. The only thing they haven't done was make love, and that, too, would have happened if Delilah wasn't afraid of what he was packing down there.