It was very good and I like the spin on this fan fic. Overall the fabric is very good and incorporated much of the original storyline based on where the story is at currently I would like Milim and Valdora to be officially included into the twins family. I would also like the story to have a wide view point, meaning I would like it to focus more on everything the Migeru is doing and also to regularly show updates on what is happening generally in the current version of the story. To conclude this review I have no complaints about the story only suggestions.about what to do in the future chapters of the fanfic.

I want to see MC 'a family and wide story of the descendants.

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The plot is very good. I like how instead of trying to not change Destiny the ND just did what ever and I like how well written it is. All of it is reasonable and contains enough surprises that people are hook.