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just run up and strip him one bit of clothing at a time. no more boost
Because he's pulling from the chained top ability users in his book, and h pulls from existing dalki. he probably touched them all during his training. Surprised there's no hard counter ability to H in all the abilities he's picked up over 1k years, and instead he just uses old elemental favorites.
correct move. war time and this isn't a MC
yeah, torture Jack into pulling back all the powers
just like Quinn. hundreds to thousands of deaths too late
both this and the statement of having the ring really should have been inside voices
they don't exist in plot
seems unlikely after just losing out on a matter of speed
no balance to gain/cost again
red red wolf boy
you're taking too long to bring Quinn back into the story
another weak death
russ shouldn't be able to absorb the crystal, but he should be able to use the power while holding it. would have been nice to see Galen steal it so its power ended up in the gauntlets tho
was demi-god last time her spear was mentioned
hopefully this is used to weaken jacks followers, and not twisted to some bs that let's him remove original and quinns powers that one were held by his bloodline
him holding the sword should revert the body, but okay. russ is also supposed to be out of MC points from making the transformation, so I guess this blast came from the sword itself.
Logan's power has to have more MC cells than the fire or the teleportation. should be a quick MC bump
agreed with the bad writing comment if he dies from this. it's a weak death that doesn't make sense with the story that's been written so far
Chris should be able to tell they're identical. all of these chapters with these two mind controlled just feel like broken plot. can't enjoy the story at all