This book has become really interesting these days. The power system is really unique and the same with character building . Martial arts concepts only found in wuxia novels are given a scientific aspect here. The only problem is that the explanation about the world is too much. Sometimes an entire chapter or two is simply about the world of the novel. Otherwise I personally don't find anything wrong.

The first novel I have read, which has approached martial arts from such a scientific perspective. The sheer depth of this approach makes me doubt if the writer is someone who came from that world. The only shortcoming I see is the excessive explanation when giving information about the lore. Otherwise this is an excellent novel I am really looking forward to its pictorial adaptation, if at all it happens

What if the condition Martial Sage is developing a martial field in which the development of brain produces an electro magnetic field which affects the surroundings. Any thoughts on that

Just a thought,if master realm is connected to martial mind, then what if Sage realm is connected to Martial Field, whereby the brain develops so much that the electro magnetic field generated by it affects the surroundings. Any thoughts