He hate Edward that much becasue the fact that looking at Edward remind him of himself.

It is okay, a refreshing take on this trope. But I feel like the MC is growing way too fast, his skill and power is already at breaking the logic level.

Very interesting. I can see how the plot was setup to surprise you in every way possible without letting you know how it goes. The writing is also decent, you have this rom-com going along with some drama. But it is make sense, somehow it actually feel like you are reading a decent novel not some edgy shit you would see in sites like this. 8/10 - more suffering would be nice

It is something new than most of the novel out there. You have a consistent character that stayed true to what define him, a depressed psychopath trying to survive in this world of bullshit. The MC is very consistent to his character, he doesnt feel horny for no reason or he isn’t biases to any of the heroines. He actually someone you shouldn’t mess with and he will make sure to pay back with interest. More like a journey so that he can be happy once again, MC actually states that he just want to be happy. There is also that “system trope” but not outright give MC OP world breaking ability, or acting as a jerk to mess him up. The system in this novel as a safety mechanism to prevent the MC from going full maniac and keep his humanity intact instead.