what for the nest world?

when you will go to the next world?

you should check the strength of Yuujirou Hanma, from that deduce the main character's strength when defeating him (remember that you gave him the purest blood)

i think it's a good idea to keep his strength and bloodline when he returns (let him unlock them slowly)

a fox mask will be better. (white color)

why it take so long for a chapter

for his harem, I will suggest Jasmine the stun-stun girl, Xia Qingyue the serious girl, and Caizhi the girl with a tragic past and fate. We can vote for the other

I think five is a reasonable number, but I like the idea of keeping it to three or four people (depending on the world), I suggest letting the girls stay in their world, To make it easier to control the number of girls if the total number exceeds ten, in some cases, it is possible to bring along with like Ophis (loli and cute, his children).

This feels like something like a Chinese novel (Mc goes back to the past, has a golden finger, and becomes instant arrogance), The plot has potential but the character development is not very good

if you are that busy, I think one every 3 or 4 days with you is OK, you can spend about 30 minutes a day to write

can you write one chapter a day

it makes him cooler and also has a lot of ways to develop the story, (also because he knows the future, it's not wrong to give him that title)

why don't we give him a mysterious identity, just like ' the watcher of destiny', which appears in places where destiny gathers.

we should reduce the Chinese protagonist situations (the main character is attacked by an arrogant young master)

it makes him cooler and also has a lot of ways to develop the story, (also because he knows the future, it's not wrong to give him that title)

why don't we give him a mysterious identity, just like ' the watcher of destiny', appears in places where destiny gathers.

make the chapter longer

two chapters in one day

naruto then

I think you should focus on this one, this novel has a very good idea. you should not write another one with the same world. Choose something different, not from naruto