DaoistSunWukong
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i just realized… how is Zell talking to all these aliens and people from all over the multiverse? does everyone speak english?
"What you are proposing is the start of a religion." Furg said. "A religion with you at the center. It is true that when my planet had religion eons ago it was able to bring warring tribes together, but it also caused wars later over disagreements in how to read the word." - DaoistSunWukong2yrCommented
head over heels *with* each other sounds better
There was perhaps a time when the two were head-over-heels to each other, but after this long separation and many unhealthy habits, it was now better to cut the rope. - DaoistSunWukong2yrCommented
mixed first person and third person narration in the same paragraph, where’s the god of grammar?
Dionysus said he would lend me 10 Eternities but he refused and the other players said they were fine with him not placing any bets in this first round. - DaoistSunWukong2yrCommented
isn’t this a plot hole? i thought aina had complete control over her body?
If it wasn't for Aina knowing that she most definitely couldn't risk having children right now, they likely would have both lost themselves to the heat of the moment.