Best novel I have ever read………………………………………………………………….…………………………………………………………………..……………………………..………………………………………………………………….…………………………………………………………………..……………………………..………………………………………………………………….…………………………………………………………………..……………………………..

I nearly like everything about this novel, but OH GOD!!! The grammar… it’s just not pleasant to read and disturbed the immersion. So please, someone edit this, the story and idea behind this is so interesting and refreshing, but the grammar just ruins it.

Love this one come on just try come on don’t be shy come on don’t cry come on be nice just try oh my You like this too? I’m just like you. ………………………………………………………………… But seriously now, just try and look if it’s your cup of tea

Just the best novel … ever dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

One of the greatest peaces I have seen on here. Would love to see more web novels like this. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx