DauntingDoubts
Daunting Dawn or Dawning Doubts, Both equally edgy names, You choose the one that seams the best, But there seems to be no change.
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DauntingDoubts23dCommentedJia Hyson is Jia Hyson no matter what world
Well, it was indeed very exciting! (∩❛ڡ❛∩) ♡- DauntingDoubts10mthCommentedCh 109 A Sudden Visit to a Certain Character: Chapter 107
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hand it over. now.
Luck : SSS+ - DauntingDoubts1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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LETS GO GOD OF POVERTY
A price is always exacted for what fate bestows—adapted from Zweig's Mary Queen of Scots. - DauntingDoubts1yrCommented
+1
A)No Harem - DauntingDoubts1yrReplied to OppressedBeans
not true. my sister killed one 1 month after buying it
Decisively he buys it after some slight modification to the original template. To his delight, a small fluffy bunny, with lopsided ears and robin blue fur appeared at the end of his bed. He'd always wanted a pet… that won't die on him because of various reasons that he may or may not have been responsible for. - DauntingDoubts1yrCommented
I wonder why. it must not have been because you threatened him, attempted to blackmailed and tried to kill him many times but because he is a jerk and doesn't want to talk to you. makes sense
Luna acted like that doesn't bother her but the more fun they had on the way, the harder it was to hold back her emotions. She wanted to know why only her. Why was she the only one he treated coldly? - DauntingDoubts1yrCommented(I don't want someone's attention is directed to me and more importantly, don't pry into my past.)
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ehem ehem
"PLEASE! LET ME GO, I DON'T WANT TO BECOME A EUNUCH! PLEASE!" The boy struggled even as he screamed. "MOTHER! SAVE ME, PLEASE!" - DauntingDoubts1yrCommented
you don't mean to intrude yet you break into their house
This paragraph has been deleted. - DauntingDoubts1yrCommentedCh 39 Chapter Thirty Nine
- DauntingDoubts1yrCommentedCh 60 Surprise
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o heck boy he can talk
"You shall not let go of the boy, Hu Chuntian." Hu-Hu's voice boomed like a thousand loudspeakers surrounding him on all sides. - DauntingDoubts1yrPosted
The story in general is very good, no obvious grammar mistakes in all of the chapters and overall good writing quality. Each dungeon world is very unique and has great backgrounds. I do think the ending was a bit rushed though. Spoiler! The only flaw I think is switching the gender of some characters, for example the guy/girl in the final dungeon world and Starbeck. because, like, why? they were finely written characters and just because they had a few 'feminine' traits you didn't have to change their gender at all.
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You know, I did not have to be exposed to this atrocity yet, you decided to share this with whoever read your comment. Kudos to you but I'm going to unlearn what I just read
[ Special Task 3: Ignorance is not bliss ] - DauntingDoubts1yrCommentedCh 40 Chap 40:- His First Friend
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ayo what
"You killed the homeless?"