its a good novel, but the author does nit update often and I feel like the novel is going away from what it's actually about and into nonsense

I agree

the lack of updates is annoying at this point

the book is really good but it has alot of grammar problems. it just need to be edited

good read, just need to be edited. it alot of unnecessary words in some of the sentences.

good book, you just need to edit chapters because of grammar problems.

the book is really good. the characters are entertaining, but the grammar is really bad. the chapters need to be edited, but other than that, it's a good read.

I think you should get someone to edit the novel. there are too many grammar problems, and it's kind of hard to read.

too many grammar problems. overall, it's a good read. It just needs to be edited.

this chapter needs to be edited

It's a good read, but it has a lot of grammar issues. it just needs to be edited.

too many grammar problems. really good novel, chapters just need to be edited.

please bring back the person who was editing the chapters before. the new editor is not doing a good job. it's too many grammatical errors in the chapters and sometimes the sentences don't flow correctly. I really like this novel but I think I'm going to drop it if this continues.

I really like this novel but please proofread the chapters before posting. Too many grammar problems. If you need help, I can help you or you can get an editor.

please edit the following chapters. too many grammar problems

please edit this chapter too many grammar problems

the book is good but you really need an editor. If you want, I can help you.

I mean she can always get on top

please edit the chapters. the book is good but too many grammar errors.

chapters are too short. please make them longer...thanks in advance [img=recommend]