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David_Kaus_78152mthPostedThe story could not be more generic, simple and unimaginative. Mc is boring and below average in all aspects. Characters embody extreme tropes right down to the very meaning of their names. I tried giving it a chance thinking it might get better but it continues to read like someone took reasonably inventive but mediocre ideas from Isekai Novels and Mangas and did not bother to innovate. Side characters also behave in telltale moronic manners reminiscent of eastern light novels and are incapable of basic reasoning and critical though. After reading the first few chapters I can't help but feel that my intelligence and common sense are being severely insulted. This reads like it is meant for entry level readers or preteens. The Story could have been written by an AI and have the same quality. That said, far be it for me to bar people from enjoying what they like. So read away if none of this bothers you.
- David_Kaus_78156mthCommented
severely overestimated you mean... she's behaving like a teen throwing a tantrum.
When did she change so much? Saburo old friend I think we have underestimated your daughter. - David_Kaus_78156mthReplied to Jhunior_ll
maybe but she isn't a jung naive women anymore but a "granny" she would be plain stupid/incompetent if she still things the same way.
<When I found out I didn't know what to do. Do I tell anyone?, do I tell my father?, I answered all those questions with a no, I knew what would happen if I told them what had occurred. I could put the unborn child in danger, just because of what some people within the corporation itself might think of a bastard, fatherless child of Saburo Arasaka's Daughter, so I decided not to tell anyone, besides. I wanted my son to live on his own terms free from the interference of others, out of the cold and empty corporate life. Without the shadow of Arasaka tormenting him. As I would have liked to live my life> - David_Kaus_78157mthCommented
She asked when he is wearing a lightsaber...
"I sense that the force is powerful within you... Are you a Jedi in clone armor or something?" Her eyes were filled with confusion as she gazed at him. - David_Kaus_78157mthReplied to Devil_Hex
It's about being from a family that almost solely focus on chakra control/emission for its main offensive weaponry. There is only so much one can make him out to be a airhead until he would not count as any kind of prodigy to his family. Hyuuga are considered ridiculous strong for a reason and not just because of Byakugan... it is about their mode of prefered combat and what is needed for them to learn... in order to do anything useful in close combat. I dislike them myself but you are selling their standards extremely short.
The practice of combination jutsus too continued and they got much faster at performing them. For Genjutsu, Renjiro's clones started by casting rank D Genjutsu on Hoka and Fujin. Within a couple of days, Fujin was able to break them. Renjiro's clone then moved onto Rank C Genjutsu for him. He began breaking the rank C Genjutsu in a couple of weeks and was currently working on breaking rank B Genjutsu. Hoka needed a month before he could break rank D Genjutsu. - David_Kaus_78157mthCommented
Y know the sorting hat is a horcrux too of sorts sooo, happy meal?
'Interesting… my magic increased even more… is it due to it not being fully assimilated before? I have to research this more.' she mused. 'I also have 2 remaining slots for this year… - David_Kaus_78151yrCommented
Jeah the right word is realistic not scientific. author seemingly wants to put ml on a pedestal instead of being a normal human being. As in since ml has two seperate phd he "has to" think things through from a scientific view rather than one of plain realism, even when human nature dictates that questioning reality comes before scientific thought and possibility. Skipping emotional and natural thought development. Indicator for autor to want to manipulate our thought process (how smart/fast and different ml is supposed to be) and/or simplify and "dumb down" the writing process. That is the third red flag i got from this novel and its only ch.2.
He was certain that he died from that crash, but waking up in another person body's? That is kind of absurd from a scientific standpoint. - David_Kaus_78151yrCommented
Falling "into" a cliff truly needs a genius i'm surprised by ml resourcefulness.
He was on his way to his main headquarters when a truck suddenly appeared from the next sharp turn. He tried to avoid colliding with it but ended up in futility. He fell into the cliff and that was the last thing he can remember. - David_Kaus_78151yrReplied to PatrioticZ
"make out her appearance" "make" only doesn't cut it.
The first thing he saw was a gilded ceiling. The second was a beautiful girl dazzling enough that he could take her out with perfect clarity despite his bleary vision. He wanted to reach up and wipe the sleep from his eyes, but he couldn't; his arms felt as if they'd been strapped to his sides. - David_Kaus_78151yrCommented
"take out" eh? I see ml is quite the predator.
The first thing he saw was a gilded ceiling. The second was a beautiful girl dazzling enough that he could take her out with perfect clarity despite his bleary vision. He wanted to reach up and wipe the sleep from his eyes, but he couldn't; his arms felt as if they'd been strapped to his sides. - David_Kaus_78151yrReplied to TsukiHanako
Doesn't it sound like japanese for "big" too?
'I'll call you Oki.' - David_Kaus_78151yrPosted