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Cover and synopsis looks nice with a reasonable update stability. Good writing quality and brad story and world background. Characters seem original too. Nice.

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Good writing quality and consistent update stability should be a must in every novel. But with this world background, it gives better color paired with unique characters and timely paced story development. Nice job.

Title kind of reminds me of I am number four. I am yet to read a few chapters but what caught my eye it the book cover. If the author is reading this, is that art original? Thanks for noticing. :)

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Looks nice for a system based game. Hoping it won't turn stale in the midpart as that's how system based stories tend to progress but all in all it's good.

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