hey, stop with this, what are you trying to do here, asking someone to contact you and give you their story without any authentication and right off the bat, sorry but there are a lot of scams out there, how can anyone trust you?

TBH, not such a special story but i gotta give credit to you for your use of language and vocabulary, I didn't read the story much since it was unable to spike my interest, so please make your work more interesting in the future. note; dear author, didn't mean to discourage you, just pointing out what I didn't like, so please don't hold anything against me. If I ever see your work in future and if I like it, i'll be sure to reply to you with a better comment, so please make your next novel worth my time. Thank You,

I like this story, especially that its very stable up-to now, the character development was something I liked. Also, the jokes were entertaining and interesting.