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isn't nyx more powerful than erebus
wasn't there one more bloodline that was extracted from gu ran?
u should also add no man's sky or starfield👍👍
leaving the backstory of the mc behind half of the story resembles a light novel which I had read 15 days ago even the power u giving is similar at least give him something that doesn't resembles the guy from that novel
some side characters can get 3 elemental powers and here our mc gets only one ....still feels like a cultivation novel where the mc can only use the same basic powers like fire and the world around him is using different 2-3 elemental powers at the same time
this is same like all the cultivation novel the only thing they know to give their mc a flame power...so disappointed thought that he could get the shadow power
but where is his skill muscle memory in the stats
only up
yeah thanks same to you👍
isn't it too early for ur mc to have a child even though the story hasn't even started
bro aren't all this power u gave the mc cliche🤣
bro ur my dude keep writing on dude i would support u on this no Yuri campaign 😤
uhh i am getting sick of u making another harem for felicia.
it's been a month dude that guy is already dead on whom you are commenting on