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Constenanto1yrCommentedliking the story quite a bit so far; i'd originally thought that the whole Daedalus bit went by a bit fast, but since you're dropping flashbacks to his time spent there learning, i think it's fine. there's a few spelling mistakes here and there, but not so many that it ruins the story. overall, cool story, can't wait to see where Icarus goes from here.
Ch 12 [Arcadia]- Constenanto1yrReplied to skyz0blue
Yeah? Sunless is his official name, but he calls himself Sunny. It's a nickname
"I'm Sunless. But you can call me Sunny." - Constenanto1yrReplied to Space_Fox
It definitely can in fiction
Sunny grimaced. It seemed that the two of them were doomed to be outcasts together for the remaining four weeks. He also felt uncomfortable in the company of someone who was practically a dead person, but there wasn't much of a choice. - Constenanto1yrCommented
If someone asks about this, he could just be quiet, or say something along the lines of "it's none of your business"
If he could only tell the truth, how was he supposed to hide his True Name? Wouldn't anyone be able to turn him into an obedient slave by simply asking a couple of innocent questions? - Constenanto1yrReplied to Jamie_Brown_4994
What's wrong with this? You have to actually explain what's wrong with the chapter if you want Legion to take what you say into account and improve himself. You're not helping yourself or Legion by just stating "this is terrible, do better". What's he actually doing wrong? I personally don't see anything wrong with it
"Don't worry, I-" Solus' body was engulfed in a blue light that seemed to come from within her. - Constenanto1yrCommented
Kamila Torchbearer 💀
"As the Overlord, I also accept Kamila Yehval as a citizen of the Blood Desert and bestow upon her the last name of Torchbearer because she shines light in the darkness like only a Phoenix should." - Constenanto1yrCommentedCh 625 Void's Long Awaited Chance
- Constenanto2yrCommented
If Fyrwal can own land, I don't see why Lith can't either. The Royals should just grant him land or something along those lines unless they want Balkor 2.0. The Kingdom can't exactly ostracize one of its best soldiers and mages just because of public opinion. Or he could just move to the Empire where they actually accept beasts, or the desert. Any would be better than the Kingdom at this point tbh.
Ch 1850 Quiet Before the Storm (Part 2) - Constenanto2yrReplied to 8Shelly8
what anime is this again?
"It was fun… really, really fun…" Her body slowly broke down into tiny lights resembling fireflies before floating towards the clouds and disappearing.