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Asstolfo_6mthCommentedI think wane or dim would be a more appropriate word choice
Unlike three days ago, the mood inside the gymnasium had not improved in any way,... On the contrary, the hope of many students and teachers began to flicker.- Asstolfo_6mthCommented
bro its realistic - the writer
Bai Zemin did not cry. After venting in an illogical but realistic manner, he simply became silent and motionless. - Asstolfo_6mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Asstolfo_6mthReplied to iLeech
must a woman be a virgin for you to date them 🤨🤨🤨 I get a preference of not wanting excessive previous sexual partners but this?
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- Asstolfo_6mthCommented" Erm… Yes. Good evening, Sister Xiao'er. What brings you here at this hour?"
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worth
But Long Ming understood his position here. Before even doing anything, Long Ming will get a rare achievement, Snu Snu to Death. - Asstolfo_7mthPosted
Honestly, sorry to say, but I think there were many bad points to this story. The writing was basic and unimaginative. Though some descriptions were interesting, paragraph after paragraph of descriptions was tiring and superfluous. Though occasionally portrayed somewhat realistically, the characters are extremely 2 dimensional without development or seemingly individual characterics, they simply change because the author said so or it is convenient. Another gripe I have with this author's writing is that he often treats the readers like idiots, which negatively impacts the writing quality. This also seems like a poor imitation of the yandere vampire story also on this site, which in of itself isn't really a bad thing, as it is different enough, but its similarities lead to comparison where this story fails to outdo or outthink the other in any way except ridiculously fast pacing (not a good thing). This pacing causes moments that could be character growth feeling forced and unnatural; such quick power scaling lessens the impact of that power while also leaving readers bewildered to what is going on. I hope the best for the author in improving their writing.
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please?
Alas, the fans of this imagined coupling knew that it would never become a reality. - Asstolfo_7mthCommented
sorry guys it was my fault they managed to... repopulate themselves
One of them was deep-sea mermaids. Lin Yuan already knew that they came from the water world and had accidentally arrived in the main world and managed to breed. - Asstolfo_7mthCommented
I have to say, the third ability is too often exactly what he wants/needs
When he saw the third exclusive skill, a smile spread across Lin Yuan's face. - Asstolfo_7mthCommented
soul -> soil
Marsh dimensional rifts opened much less frequently than abyss and water world dimensional rifts. Hence, top grade marsh soul was much more valuable than top grade strange flames and strange water. - Asstolfo_7mthCommentedHaah, it is so sad that I am just a caterpillar and I cannot find out anything at all! I want to meet a cute catgirl…
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pretty sure 100 is the level it will get to with rest and over that is like temporary additional satiety?
[Stamina: 127/100 - Asstolfo_7mthCommented
urgent -> urgency
After the transformation, Vincent Wolf felt that his body had undergone indescribable changes, and there was a sense of urgent need to vent the stuffy feeling. - Asstolfo_7mthCommented
shpuld be hundreds of meters away at least, tens of meters and I can see where I was launched
[Thanks to the excellent force-dispersion effect of [Water Flow Armor], you do not suffer severe injuries, but you are flung tens of meters away and have no idea where you are.] - Asstolfo_7mthCommented"If you saw it first, then it's yours? Then there wouldn't be so much NTR in the world!" Pam showed disdain.
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a hint of melancholy that is rather intriguing is such a bad descriptor
Looking down from high altitude, through thin cloud layers, one can see the vast blue ocean below the white clouds, creating a beautiful reflection like a curved mirror in the sky. - Asstolfo_7mthCommented
regular diamond shape? ♦️? 💎?
Looking down from high altitude, through thin cloud layers, one can see the vast blue ocean below the white clouds, creating a beautiful reflection like a curved mirror in the sky.