haven't reviewed this in a while so here i am! i love how the story is going so far and the more recent chapters are just amazing! i think the way you're writing this story is so realistic and i love how cordelia isn't just some spineless mc but an amazing strong force to be reckoned with

same! i want her to crush him

i think it's like she could ruin him if she wanted to

this has made me love sluggy i can just imagine him getting all red in the face trying to intimidate two teenagers who are taller than him

i feel like in a way the author's trying to depict how we like to be friends with people who we feel like are on the same level as us and since after winning the tournament cordelia became like this renowned powerful girl everyone else is kind of intimidated and distancing themselves and she could have fixed that by just being nice or talking it out but she didn't so they choose to blame her

ikr we've been waiting for this

tom- nooo you little shit how could you do that to an innocent little animal, that's so wrong. but at the same time i love how you're not making tom uwu like some other people do and are actually showing how he really was

omg love the new installment! the way lia talks to nix is so relatable lol i do that all the time with my pets, it just helps to think out loud

ahh omg i never would have expected that twist in the story! like i knew that he was kinda sketch but the fact that he was the killer?! insane! such a good plot twist!

ayy are we going to have a love triangle with the 👀

Dark Paradise was honestly the BEST Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read on here and now that Light Purgatory is out I'm expecting great things from our author!

love how you started this off!!

yay I'm so excited for the sequel!

the calm before the storm

this chapter has no business being so sad

Your story is very good. It has a good plot and the characters are written nicely. I think that you need to work a little on background building but except for that you're doing a great job

I think your story is pretty great! It is well written and the plot is unique, something i personally haven't read before, i also like the relations between the characters and the way they're written and portrayed

just small things like grammar and pacing, but you can fix that with an editor

This story was a comeplling read. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Your writing style could use a little improvement but its nothing too bi so you don't have to worry. Overall your plot is also pretty great. Good job!

you are really good at writing, i love how you describe things and paint the picture i think your characters are also unique and well developed and overall the story is great