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i like it, it's seem like a lot of work, thank you for it đâ¤ď¸
i personaly think tthe ovel will be more good without all thr onomatopĂŠe (sorry i'm french and my level in english is kinda mixed, but it's : " ba doom" "sheef" " boom" abd all the hings like that. bit it pretty cool, we can easily imagine all the scenes đđ