Why is it that now of all times he reveals his blood test.? Why didn’t he show his Bloodthirst when he killed that bandit? In that chapter he literally stated he wasn’t overly cruel or a maniac and gave the bandit a swift and merciful death. You don’t have to lie to the readers in order to make your reveal more surprising or whatever. That was that in character moment where he speaking to himself why would he lie to himself? I don’t usually mind an evil MC if that’s what I’m looking for, but when the author contradicts himself in his own story it turns me off from the story.

Since when was the MC evil? His first action in this story was to give a tenth of all the money he had to help a poor family of his own volition. He seemed to be a grey or neutral character based off of all his actions in the story.

There are more onomatopoeias that exist

What?

By who? Hus whole family is dead.

I I have not liked a single character you’ve made neither Ethyl or the MC they’re just awful annoying and pedantic

Why are the conversations full of bad grammar and vocabulary

WhWhy do you make the main character someone who’s determined to lose his virginity but then put every obstacle on his way into actually losing it? Because rot bite affecting his life it doesn’t even make any sense it’s called right by not rot saliva you didn’t specify that the scale turned his entire mouth into a container for the rot

BBut it could also cause him to lose his flesh which is what he wants to avoid because he wants to lose his virginity in this world so he’s not gonna risk it. Hey I’ll just stick with things that have flesh

HHey correct me if I’m wrong but usually the [Character] screen shows what the character looks like right ey

Why give him the ability to use a stat points to increase his skills, and ability he normally never would’ve gotten, just to make it irrelevant a few chapters later? That’s bad writing and terrible system management if you’re going to give him that ability you should also give him a way to make that ability useful instead of wasting the time creating ability in the first place.

What if that hiding place is nearly ten minutes away or something

A hint for the future don’t use the same word with two connotations and subjects in the same story let the same sentence. A better would’ve been Tier, Stage, etc.

So if the beast reached peace God stage they’d be called beast beast gods if

Hey genius he ever think maybe they didn’t do that at them. Maybe your first clue should’ve been based in humans lived in harmony

That’s assuming he can use it on objects other than himself

That doesn’t make it useless it just makes it not as good as others

Yeah funny but if that was actually possible he probably would’ve already done that

He’s currently under C the impression that there has been a lot of advancement in magic theory since he died. Whether or not he’s right is yet to be seen.

And that’s different from owning a cat how exactly?