absolutely adore these light novels. The story takes the reader on an amazing and emotional ride through a well-developed world. The protagonist is so likeable, and the reader really gets into his head. Certain events and POV chapters had me crying or gasping in shock.

Few errors here and there but not so much to cause a problem in reading. Cherecter degine is good, well written. Do try to describe the scenry more clearly.

Nice chapter like the way re written a work to make interest. Nice story dev But di change the name to create a suspense. At least better than some fanfic.

A nice novel like the 13th chapter and can't wait for the next chapter I hope you will publish a new chapter and correct all the errors otherwise it makes the reader kind of confusing

Keep it up, this novel is might become one of the decent webs novels if tried a little bit harder. The overall story is good and interesting. Mc is sometimes funny and a bit emotional. And do develop the sister character more. And try to publish regularly.

nice

thanks