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"Wake up wake up.... its time for school."
oh .... c*m on my face
* Ninja World could have been a better choice of word. Just saying .....
This just doesn't feel right, i mean the fanfic plot seems good enough but the choice of words make it less appealing leaving a bad taste while reading. I don't mean anything bad in that regards but i hope 'you' read a few official Naruto LN that could give you some sense of right words and pacing.
Just saying, it's too Chinese fir me to digest.
"4 digits"!! Does this mean this will have more than a thousand chaps..?
don't use the word "realm", gives off Chinese "chingchong Bing chilling" feeling!
Fill in the blank: I call it bull____!
really hot