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Python7648

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New author age:15

2021-08-07 JoinedUnited States
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  • Python7648
    Python76482yr
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    Shameless review I feel my writing quality could be better which is why I gave it a 3/5 this is my first novel so bare with me. My update stability is every day except for the days I don't have ideas for a chapter. My story Is very fast-paced so if u like that type I think you'll enjoy it. Character design is fine I have complaints like not being descriptive enough but that will change starting with chapter 5. I haven't explored the world or explained its rules yet but I'm sure.......actually no in my head I could imagine it well but in the story, I'm practicing how to describe the scenery. I'm using this novel to improve my writing abilities so i estimate it will be 15-30 chapter long so a short story or 1 volume to be exact

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    Futures Past
    Sci-fi · Python7648
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  • Python7648
    Python76482yr
    Commented

    Loving this story so far!!![img=recommend]

    Ch 9 Damn! Thats Cool!
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    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • Python7648
    Python76482yr
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    I will try to make chapter 2 a lot longer

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Future
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    Futures Past
    Sci-fi · Python7648
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  • Python7648
    Python76482yr
    Replied to GRE3D

    nah vampire system was kinda boring this one drew me in more

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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