Charlotte and Clorinde aye? I wonder how Isaac will handle this. Charlotte probably came after hearing gossip and rumors about him with Lady Furina and trying to get an article, while Clorinde was probably sent by Neuvillette to evaluate Isaac and see if he a threat to Furina or has any ulterior motive. Also don’t be afraid to take a break after feeling burnt out. Last thing you want to overextend yourself with a good story on going. This is genuinely one of the best Genshin story I’ve read. :)

Professionals have Standards. Be polite. Be efficient. Have a plan to kill everyone you meet. Good chapter yet again! Bit “bland” in a sense but it has to be for build up. Can’t wait to see how Isaac got into the situation his in. Fantastic work as always.

Fantastic work as always with useless Goddess Holmes and (Definitely Not) Moriarty assistant. Imagine in the next chapter Isaac hints he knows something about the primordial water and sinthe along with the truth behind Dallas’s death.

It would be funny if the Arlecchino both speculates that Neuvillette and MC are possibly the Hydro Archon, if MC managed to do feats questionable enough to make Arlecchino think that way.

True, having the gnosis doesn’t seem important besides verifying if the god is the archon of the element and nation. From what Venti and Ei seems to say, the gnosis really isn’t anything useful to them as it doesn’t give any power up besides reminding them of Celestia’s grip over Teyvat

Bro casually rizzed an archon. Anyways, fantastic chapter as always, Furina casually leaking her entire plan does seem Furina-esque. Other thoughts Im having is traveler in your story Lumine or Aether? Will Isaac help in Act.1 in court when Furina starts losing and intervening as part of a quest from the system to at least retain Furina’s dignity? Will one of Isaac’s persona appear in the fortress of meripe. Will Arlecchino talk with Isaac, Furina and traveler? So many opportunities with this story. Keep at it!

Is Aqua/Useless goddess from Konosuba all over again

Considering how Arlecchino easily baited Furina with a cat in the Archon Quest, her falling into Isaac’s bait isn’t that far from probability…

The protagonist called themselves a hypocrite, which is rightfully prove to be true. He stated before he hated the gods/archons but would do anything for Nahida. He said that his a spectator for the storyline in Genshin but interfered with minor events that could have future consequences. Which is honestly really interesting from my point of view.

Overall everything in this story is amazing, there’s some grammar mistakes here and there but it doesn’t derailing from what I’m actually reading. Overall this is a type of Genshin story I’ve been looking for, but if I do have one critique is that Fontaine itself hasn’t been really that important for the story so far, but that is to be expected as not everything of Fontaine has been revealed in Genshin. I have a theory about the main character but I’ll wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

That’s understandable, Mahouka can be loaded with Details and such, but as long you know the general timeline of events then I think you should be fine.

Wonderful arc so far, considering it’s completely original and self-made, I would give some advice but I don’t wanna ruin your future plans for the story. Out of curiosity, how far are you in the Mahouka light novel?