Power Up ... Power Up ... Power Up... All the Energies - Thanos

A day in the life of outcasts...

A cockroach can survive even an apocalypse....kekeke

Increasing team members?

Very obvious clue.. 🙄...

Obviously they won't mess with the dungeon boss. I mean, like seriously, they reallly are not trouble-makers. Isn't it?

I can feel the extinguished spirit of an exhausted student oozing out of these few chapters? Are you perhaps toooo into the character author?😉

This constant foreshadowing that something drastic will happen is keeping me on the edge of my seat. Calm before the storm.

I can relate.😭

Author, why soo short chapter 😢 😞? But the tension is building quite well if I might say so.

Second!! Ugh the cliffhanger... making me unable to concentrate elsewhere.. Nevertheless a good chapter 😌

So far its been good with a very unique starting 👌. But I would have to say that the story is very slow paced hmm actually it would be better to say it's there isn't much tension - atleast for the more than first half of the story. Nevertheless it is a good book and keep it up writer.

Can't agree more here!

Can't agree more

Author why don't you just add mystery tag as well to make the novel complete? Cause except this the story is perfect 🥰 . Keep up the good work 👏.

Joe mama haha

It's relatively good considering other fan fiction but not the best one. Had unique concepts of 'vaults' but it being there and acting like some kind of legacy without any development and some other stuff dragged it down a bit. But overall a good read.

I think otherwise...hmm...might like her without these mortal formalities(clothes) even more. Just an opinion after realising his inner thoughts.