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Author if you are feeling like you are trapped I think that take a little break and gather your thoughts first. As you have also mentioned you are a new author. Feeling burned out when trying to write a very detailed story with a completely OC character is pretty much given. But trying to solve this situation by braching out the story will not solve the fundamental problem. Gathering your thoughts will be good for you even if you want to branch out your story. Take a break you think it is necessary for you to take then make a plan for your next steps. We are reading your story for the good quality of it. No need to rush.
Human greed is boundless you only need to walk your own path. Thanks for all this time.
Author don't listen to whiners you have your own style and hundreds of chapters and since Fujin is finally entering maturity the best part is just starting for your webnovel. You are doing fabulous. You have cooked for 2 years and finally at canon. We loyal readers just don't comment at every chapter. Thanks for the chapter.
This bird n'wah is riot
So not at Chief Gods level but close enough. And there is another thing the levels after Truegold is mostly about self realization so will he be like shonen protagonist, 15 years hard work takes to this place but at close calls serious powerups and look down on world in 1 year? Since the dude is hundreds of thousands years old I think he self realized to the end when he was at multiversal level?
Author I want to ask something. What are you aiming to make power scale of the MC? Since you are making MC follow the power system of Abidan Verse and at that verse the level after Truegold, Underlord have the capability to level entire cities with their attacks and this city is according to standards of Cradle World, after this level he should be capable of effecting countries in DxD Earth. Does this mean he is literally at the cusp of joining the start of true powerhouses?
Well I don't want to talk bad without reading rest of the fic but this whole interaction is literally a copy-paste from Annihilation Maker DXD Chapter 5 so I hope you won't repeat something like this again Author. Since it is actually quite a masterpice it leves a bad taste.
Honest to good FGO. Make it like at most 7 servants can be summoned to the Eden with the highest bond level restriction and at the time of the game he learns homunculus creation then with the heavy lifting of Chaotic Creatia make summoned servants incarnate to homunculi, be proper living humans not servant vessels like reincarnated heroes. It is pretty random but can be fun or chaotic if you decide to make I don't know.