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MarSher671yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 34 Chapter 32: Let go
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your book is very confusing,,,who are the male and female in the story,,so many vocabulary error,, the she is a he or his and the he is the she or her. going chapter by chapter to truly understand what you trying to write. Use tools as grammar to improve your language skills, as I imagine English isn't your 1st language. Learn the language before you write so that you can make phrases that make sense and that your readers will understand .
Ch 135 Chapter 135 We are getting engaged soon. - MarSher671yrCommentedCh 86 Chapter 86 You agreed?
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 119 Beautiful, Confident and Fiesty
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 45 Do You Love Him?
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 257 Living Together
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 157 Anne big secret
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 27 Chapter 27
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 10 Chapter 10
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 606 [Bonus chapter]The Wisdom of Jack
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 565 Return Home
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 306 Friend's Advice* Again
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 296 Throwing the Ball
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 256 Meeting formally
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 224 First Mistake
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 257 Living Together
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 188 Trying to Find Out
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 5 A New Status
- MarSher671yrCommentedCh 792 Epilogue 13