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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
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    there we go. I knew there was a reason for her being so terrified of the injured men. this will be a growing experience for her (^///^)

    She remembered going to his room having been woken up and finding him sitting on the floor holding one of her mother's dresses against his cheek. There were broken glass and wood everywhere from where he had thrown his wine bottles and broken a chair.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
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    girl friend nooooooo

    Her stomach turned as she thought of what Cora had said about the marks on Vincent. Miles said they spread out from his wounds. How far? He had a wound on his shoulder. Were there marks on his neck? Maybe he could wear shirts with higher collars?
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
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    don't worry. you are on the right path to actually understand other people better

    Delaney wondered if she and Vincent would ever have a chance to have their kind of feelings for one another. She knew they cared about one another but she could see it wasn't as deep as Cora cared for Miles or Olive for Bernard. Vincent was kind and handsome but she didn't truly know much about him. Not enough to care for him so much.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    that is a cool explanation for dragons fire

    "It's not that simple," Cora whispered as Miles closed his eyes against the memory, "The dragon's breath fire but the flame is lit in their mouths. There is a poison that oozes from their teeth that ignites. So... so the teeth..."
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
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    here we are ppl!!!!! GET READY GOR THE BEST, MOST FRUSTRATING CHARAVTER DEVELOPMENT EVERRRRR!!!!! LETS GOOOO DELANEY!!!!!

    "Delaney," Cora came forward and took her friend's hand, "Vincent was caught by the dragon."
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    good. it should have.

    The thought made her uneasy.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    it is really sad that she has gone so long without any word from Vincent. Sure she is being self absorbed but she is just a teenager, but that long without any letter or note is bound to mess with your psych.

    Delaney had them taken to her room where she returned to look at them. She sat on the end of her bed and looked at the gown hanging across the room and again thought about the way her birthday might have been. In a different life, that would be the dress she would've worn to her birthday ball.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    dayum that would be so hard to hear as a commoner. I cannot wait to see below she looks back on this

    "I am!" Delaney shouted and gestured towards the stables, "I'm better than all of this!"
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    who else instantly worried it was Vincent and not a stable hand?

    Delaney realized then this was one of the men that had worked in the stables at her school. He wasn't much older than Vincent. "No," she whispered, shaking her head and stepping away from him, "Oh no no no..."
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    she isn't stubborn for wanting to save lives.

    Cora stepped out of the open door then, getting down from the carriage. "Well, I'm going in," she waved a hand over her shoulder, "You can come with me or sit out here and not even try." With those words she turned and marched towards the stables, reminding Delaney of the stubborn little girl she used to be. Before she could build up her dread even further, Delaney lifted her skirts and hurried to follow the other woman.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    you will see his handsome face again.... it will just be a slightly different handsome face

    Ch 13 The News
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    I feel like Delaney is obviously the main female character but CORA is a real show stealer and I love her to boot

    Up in her room, Delaney found her friends all waiting for her. She had hardly seen them since the night of the party at Vincent's. They waited eagerly to hear all about her time with him and tell all about their own weeks. It seemed everyone had spent most of their time with their husbands to be, even Cora, who said she was surprised to find Miles wasn't as stupid as she thought.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    yeah same I thought this was over like a month. good timeline pace rhough

    Much too soon their week was over and they were all loading into carriages again to head back to school. When Vincent's carriage stopped in front of Delaney's house she hurried out to meet him. He grinned his familiar handsome grin as he leaned against a post in front of the house.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    I like this shallow character. I hope she developes into a less shallow one but this is a crazy simple and perfect flaw to have that you just don't see enough

    Delaney looked past him for a moment and saw how everyone seemed to watch them and she nearly laughed. She may not be a child anymore but she still got a secret thrill from the attention. She knew that was part of the reason she loved the club. Being one of the only women there, all eyes were usually on her. Now here, with Vincent, she had that again.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    yeeeessssss awkward teen dances let's goooooooo

    Mliles put out his hand hesitantly, still looking around for his mother, but Cora grabbed it, dragging him out onto the floor. When the music began, the pair started dancing and it quickly became the most memorable dance of the night. No sooner had they started, then Miles stepped too soon, crushing Cora's toes beneath his foot. She yelped and scrambled back. He turned bright red, apologizing and trying to quickly pull her back into the dance which only resulted in them stepping the wrong direction and slamming into one another's chests.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    oh this is well written. great setting of the stage.

    Ch 1 A Bargain and A Race
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Replied to NatalieKnowsNothin

    Honestly xD

    "I can promise you boy, that's not going to last for long," the baby girls father laughed and Vincent's father joined in, clapping him on the back. Their wives told them to quit but were trying to hide their own smiles at the tease.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_111mth
    Commented

    I had the same thought as the first comment xDDD

    "I can promise you boy, that's not going to last for long," the baby girls father laughed and Vincent's father joined in, clapping him on the back. Their wives told them to quit but were trying to hide their own smiles at the tease.
    My Once Handsome Husband
    Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_112yr
    Commented

    only appesrs infron of those worthy??? how on EARTH does the man get any fresh air?

    They started to head towards the ballroom, and Beth said, "The King appears only in front of people who are worthy of him."
    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • Harles_11
    Harles_112yr
    Commented

    It is pretty heavily inferred that Madeline has a plain dress but i wonder if the beige is close to her skin tone. That alone would be extremely eyepopping as people deduced whether she was actually nude xD an excellent set up, author ✌🏼

    The castle was lit up with torches of fire, and right now it looked beautiful. Madeline continued to look at the castle which in truth was as big as the village they lived in. Every person who had stepped out of the carriage and was getting down were dressed in different materials and texture of clothing that was eye-catching.
    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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