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mayathe4th

mayathe4th

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just your boring book nerd, I think? I love a good fantasy novel. whenever I need a cool down from taxes, I read

2021-08-02 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th1yr
    Posted

    I really love this. if anything I am a little sad it is over but I really liked it. and I like that it isn't your standard superhero story . overall a really good read!

    altalt
    Solo Leveling(Only I level up)
    DUBU (REDICE聽STUDIO), Chugong, h-goon
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th1yr
    Posted

    I like the overall idea and story, but I think it needs help from a really dedicated proofreader. the grammar mistakes spoil the story a lot. there are multiple mistakes in every chapter. I don't know if it gets better in the later chapters, I only read the first 30 or so.

    altalt
    Cohabitation With My Ex-Husband
    UrbanFallenAngel4869
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th1yr
    Commented

    girl got her priorities straight 馃ぃ ... bring the maid of honour over some silly secrets. that's a real friend...

    Ch 19 Bribe
    altalt
    Unexpected Encounter: A Second Chance at Love
    UrbanSofia05
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th1yr
    Commented

    this girl has her priorities right! <3

    Ch 193 Dream Or Reality?
    altalt
    The King's Mistress
    FantasyValestriaMoon
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th2yr
    Commented

    every girl needs a friend like this ... who unconditionally accepts if you don't want to talk but is there for you when you want to.

    Ch 51 The Warmth of His Lips
    altalt
    Mated To An Enemy
    Fantasyzwoz
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th2yr
    Commented

    if my husband works out it would never be noticed by me unless it is very very obvious, because I see him every day... what a stupid comment

    Ch 56 Chapter 56
    altalt
    Never Judge
    Realisticwounded_warrior
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th2yr
    Posted

    the spelling and grammar mistakes are too much for me. it makes it hard to understand and I got stuck often. many scenes were to hasty, others were drawn out endlessly (and needlessly). a good editor would really help the book. I don't know about the ending, I didn't reach it.

    altalt
    The Rejected Mate
    UrbanSladeAngel
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  • mayathe4th
    mayathe4th2yr
    Posted

    I really enjoyed the story, but it gets unorganized and chapters are repeating. I just had 3 mixed chapters in a row. that's it for me, I'll drop this. contact me when it's fixed ...

    altalt
    His Rogue Luna
    FantasyGoddess-Of-Dawn
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