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The character's personality/interaction, i can't keep my finger on it but it doesn't seem as realistic the way they talk etc. Anyway, it's a decent read, maybe not just my cup of tea. Keep writing, hopefully w.e I said will improve w.e I think you are lacking but can't word. Or feel free to just think of it as random online guy just talking bs XD
Wow this annoying trope being brought here from Chinese web novels of others looking down on others and weird character interaction. I really hope the author improves and not take these generic dialogues and character interaction from CN in the following chapters. It's really hard to read....