Be a Thriver not just another survivor

like what I'm reading so far.

Are the names getting mixed up.

You don't need to apologize. Good writing. Remember the Late, Great Julia Child. "There are mo mistakes if the guests aren't looking." Bob Ross says,"no mistakes just happy accidents"

getting confused with interchangeable names...(Victor,Adrian, King)

This seemed repetitive and not very well defined timeline

The money issue is very confusing. She was saving money and had enough to live from working fewer hours and going back to school. Now she owes every hand in the street?

I thought Misty said Leo was baby daddy

wait...what. sexual tension between them and them a homophobic slur?

I'm sure Wu didn't drug and trap anyone. if the baby has powers either the birth mother or father does. she is probably hiding from birth father

Why continue writing 'peach blossom' and 'plum blossom ' tree. they only blossom in spring and are plum and peach trees. it's too repetitive and annoying

cat man needs a name and back story

cat man was a nice touch

turn of events...a new ally

When did the Duke become Lyon?

Nice beginning but I'm confused about the book within a book concept. More convincing if a premonition

Mabel is the cousin. so Martin is not her BIL

Preston or Princeton

I thought they were twins???

"a ball of what?"