Guilherme_Rios
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I don't understand, why is he being berated for? For not saying to the hokage that he knew the kage bunshin? He did try to lead hiruzen by the nose there, giving the exact scenario that the jutsu would be useful without saying the name of the jutsu.
veelas*
is he under imperius curse? maybe dumbledore?
The story is very good. It is written with flashbacks, explaining what is being discussed in the trial. I find this type of writing very engaging. The characters are not so well depicted. The background is not so well depicted as well. But this is something to be expected if you have read the other books from the author. The plot is very good, as it was in the other novels by the author. All in All, it is a very good fanfic, by the standards of the stories on webnovel, this is godlike.
VOLDEMORT**
The bad criticism don't matter, don't get worked over it. The history is good, the pacing is good as well, but there will always be people who complain. It could be the best fanfic of the world, but there will be people complaining. Just focus on the history and you will be good. This fanfic is great.