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Wow the paragraph, I feel like I'm reading a history book
maybe it didn't say when does Renxue started disguising as the crown Prince
Author should make Xiao Mo have some character development when he grows up. Make him more aware of his actions, not so arrogant. Him having Renxue as his FL is enough Ye lingling should be a person who have one sided love. In addition, please don't make so much cringe scenes of him and Renxue it makes me want to drop this.
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this is the reason why I don't hate the Spirit Hall even though they're the villains in Soul land. You really shouldn't judge anyone without knowing the real reason or what other people think.
oi ossan
no, don't be impatient.. if my boy killed Xiao Wu and Tang San already the story would be too boring. It would be fun if they evolve from friend to enemy and to friend
because the common sense of modern era and old era is very different my boy
It's spirit emperor, "SPIRIT EMPEROR"!!!
no, she's cute. It just felt diff.. she's a useful crybaby
14 because in previous chapters they say that "he's only 12 and he reached lvl 23 already".
Still, I want him to be the Supreme Pontiff (〒﹏〒)
kinda cute(( ˶ ❛ ꁞ ❛ ˶ )
I like that mc's progress is not so fast like other douluo fanfics where mc is just 10y/o and already a spirit emperor
lol whenever I read this I always mistaken yunlong stuttering
My thoughts about the story. Firstly, I praise author for a good gob on timeskips even though the first chapters are just author's imagination or somethin'. Second,author-san.. what's with the sweet home Alabama? I think it would be better if you make them doting mother and sibling with no other meaning. Third, the personalities. For Bibi Dong author san should've make her not sooOo obsessed with her son(oh plus! make more scenes of her cold side). For Renxue, love her tsundere attitude also like the bro con personality. But again.. what's with the sweet home Alabama?. Fourth, author-san..😞 I think the MC's side of story is too fast, I think you should made the God trial at the same time with tang San's.. Fifth, I don't mind the harem even though I don't like harem but MC should do adult things when he's around 18-20.. I mean he's just a 12 y/o boy even though he is a reincarnator and what's with Er Long being part of his harem? Sixth, if it's about MC's lovelife honestly I prefer a female lead instead of harem. MC is too op for a 12 y/o.. author-san should've nerfed him. I mean in douluo continent child at the age of 12 reaching lvl 29 is already a talent but a 12 y/o child reaching lvl 70? Its too op! Give him some problems sometimes author-san. Well I've come this far reaching the 200th chapter so I think I kinda find the storyline good.😗(hehehehe)