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I said: I hope this fanfic is better than the one you mentioned because if it's the one I created, it became too political for my taste with the Skywalker Empire and I didn't like the biological modifications, also the force wasn't exactly on Anakin's side. My preference for the harem: Padme, Ahsoka, Barris and if you are going to get involved with time travel, King but well written please, more than anything because of his relationship with Palpatine It's just my preference, obviously the author is you. I will read your fanfic the same way I write this to you, with the translator
Espero que este fanfic sea mejor,deje el que mencionas porque se volvio muy politico con el imperio skywalker y la fuerza no estaba apoyando exactamente a anakin Harem en mi preferencia:padme,ahsoka,barris y si te vas a meter con viajes en el tiempo a rey pero bien escrita porfavor mas que nada por su relacion con palpatine que es lo unico interesante del pj
First of all, good chapter. Too bad about that spinarak egg, surely it was lost or will Percy go back to look for it and find it? I doubt it. It must be training them without the necessary resources, not to mention that even with how difficult it would be to obtain and evolve one of them, it is not worth it if they do not respect you.
I think it's a good ending to the fight even if I had won it's not worth waiting months to cure pidgeot when he could train and get stronger in that time what bothers me is that ash will surely have it much easier than jord and he will surely have a big ego for that reason and if with a month of training it was so close the fight with one more week would be enough for him to win although I did not see that he used a steel wing to redirect electricity to the ground I thought that was his plan with pidgeot
hello, I like this story and I hope for an update, percy will be sponsored by the family that governs that city? have connections and monetary funds, it has already been seen that a common trainer with no one to sponsor them is a mediocre trainer who gets excited about pokemons with yellow potential..., I guess crash and growlite will have purple potential when they evolve, what do you say of pokemons like gyarados? magikar must be very common but gyarados are absolute beasts, I imagine they would reach at least red potential, how can a pokemon as common as magikar be a power when it evolves? everyone would capture magikar to have their gyarados, the only explanations that come to mind are these. 1:magikar is very hard to evolve takes time and resources that common trainers can't afford. 2: when they evolve into gyarados they become very violent and difficult to tame to the point of killing their trainers who did not earn their respect or consider them their leader, therefore it is not worth the effort and the risks. maybe a combination of both to explain the rarity of a trainer with a gyarados. If percy catches an insect I hope it's schyther it's the only one I like...