See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

loving this book my goodness can't wait for Anita to get whTs coming to her xxx

you are kidding me give us proper chapters will you this is disgraceful

all this time for that not even a full chapter are you kidding me if you don't want to finish the book just refund us our hard earned money back that I feel your robbing us of

this is ridiculous spent over 100 pound reading this book author you are just greedy now give us some proper chapters and end this book please and no updates for two days

the shortest unfinished chapter yet come on this is getting ridiculous now we want proper chapters and a finished book please xxx

when are you updating your book please x

that chapter was pitiful and ridiculously short come on and five us a proper bloody chapter you are just too greedy

chapters are ridiculously short again stop and give us the story already spending for too much

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

what ever Anita plans we know it's gonna slap her in the face and fail big time. jade is playing with fire we all know they are going to finally start where they left off we all know there is sexual chemistry there

loving the story think Harry needs to just get it on with jade quickly and Tom needs to just tell Lucy straight away he has to xx

that has to be the shortest chapter ever come on more longer chapters please

now come on I want the rest of yhese chapters I have unfortunately spent all my last £40 on this book please give me the rest xxx

I refused to spend forty pounds on four chapters already spent bout 100 pound on this book alone no way am I spending another 40 pound on four chapters

please please please stop dragging this on and finish all ready xxx

seriously spent too much money not to have some chapters please

me to my partner will hit the roof the amount I have spent the privileges and buying each chapter easily spent over 40 pound on this bookmark fool me and author dragging it on drips and drabs xxx