Thank you for the review. I'm planning on adding more depth to the characters and edit the chapters soon.

Thanks I'll be working on editing the chapters soon

Thank you. The story gets much better later with more interesting characters and events :)

Thank you for the review. I'm gonna edit the chapters soon. I know the world building is not that great but thats on purpose since the story is mostly about Peter and his crazy adventures lol. I'll flash the world more once I'm done with the water kingdom and explore the other races and kingdoms.

While this isn't my type of story the novel is still well written and has good characters with great background if you love vampires stories then give this one a chance :)

Few Grammars mistakes but nothing can't be fixed. characters are detailed and the world is interesting, the story has the potential to be great, keep it up, author :)

I Have to give it 5 stars alone for writing quality. I hope one day my writing skills will be just as good. I read the first four chapters and it's an interesting idea with a fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. Let's see where the story go :)

Thank you

Ok so I read the first three chapters and it's an interesting idea with a fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. It seemed much unique from other stories. I can't wait for chapters. this novel is going to my library.

Thanks

Honestly, this is a great novel. I really like the writing and the characters. I did not expect me to enjoy it this much. Good work, keep it up.

Thanks for the review :) I'm working on fixing the grammar.

Really? what's the name of the manga?

Hello, I'm planning for some fun, crazy, and over-the-top set pieces for this novel. I promise you that lol. Please leave a review and add it to your library, if you enjoyed reading it helps me a lot :)

Great book, well-written story, excellent creativity and interesting plot. Chapters have the power to pull the readers attraction from the very beginning. The flow of the story is great, engaging, and easy to understand. Moreover, the writer has a unique way of writing and describing everything.

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

Thank you. I'm trying to improve my writing :)

Great book, well-written story, excellent creativity and interesting plot. Chapters have the power to pull the readers attraction from the very beginning. The flow of the story is great, engaging, and easy to understand. Moreover, the writer has a unique way of writing and describing everything, which is really good.

The idea is unique. That's creative from the writer. Interesting start makes you don't want to stop reading. It's very interesting for me. can't wait for more chapters,