LarcsytSalu
when I come across typos or wrong word choice/phrase, I mention it using: "*corrected*" instead of "reg"; *corrected; reg ⏭ corrected My way of assisting non-native English authors sound more fluid
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LarcsytSalu4dCommented🤔 I wonder who this "him" that Feng Wuchen is referencing could be?
Feng Wuchen slowly stood up, his eyes turning extremely cold, causing hearts to tremble: "Isn't it just because you think I have mediocre talent and am unworthy of you? Afraid that I will hold you back and be a laughingstock, if you want to go with him, I will not have the slightest regret!"- LarcsytSalu4dCommented
i thought Feng Wuchen was fighting Mo Ling'er? if so, isn't Mo Ling'er Female? ?
After looking at the despondent Feng Wuchen for a moment, the young man finally makes his move. With one palm strike, he sends Feng Wuchen flying, spitting blood from his mouth, his complexion turning pale as paper in an instant. - LarcsytSalu7dCommented
i know I'm being repetitive, but could "second room" be "second family" instead?
Originally, he had planned to con the money from the sale of the pig from the second room. Unexpectedly, his horse inexplicably got startled and even kicked someone to death. He had to spend six taels of silver to shut the mouth of the coachman who witnessed the event. He had hoped to recoup the lost silver and pig selling money from the second room, but in the end... it turned out like this! - LarcsytSalu7dCommented
again with the "second room" . is that a mistranslation or is it more of a cultural saying that very few Americans would be familiar with? (which I'm apparently not 1 of)
"Ah—how can this be?" Lady Mu Bai sat down on the floor with a thud, clapping her thigh and wailing, "What a travesty! Are you in the second room blaming me for favoritism? While I indeed gave the land and house to your eldest uncle, the expenses spent on your father were certainly not less. I even pawned my dowry silver bracelet to finance your father's schooling, the only piece of jewelry I had..." - LarcsytSalu7dCommented
"The second room" ?? ?
The uncle looked at his son's assertive actions with satisfaction, stating seriously, "The country has its laws, the family has its rules. The second room made a big mistake and ought to be punished. It's for your own good. Otherwise, if you maintain this disloyal and unfilial character and bring it to the outside world, won't it disgrace our old Mu family?" - LarcsytSalu11dCommented
who's Yun Duo? ? I thought the mill owner was showing something to the MC, Pei Qin ?! ?!
Yun Duo saw the scraper-like object he had made and twitched the corner of her eye, "That's a bit too abstract!" - LarcsytSalu13dCommented
dang .she was very straightforward! !!
"My most embarrassing moment?" Song Huanyan glanced at the questioner and said with a smile, "My fiancé slept with my cousin, does that count as embarrassing?" - LarcsytSalu15dReplied to asKEW
considering in next chapter the fl states she is 19 yrs old, I'm gonna say it's 19 yrs later as in after the kidnapping
Nineteen years later - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
*her so
As for the Li mama saying that a stranger had entered the courtyard, the Prime Minister felt that it was most likely that this lass had self-directed him so that she could lure him over. Only then could the scene in front of them be put on well. - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
*she said…*she raised her hand…*she continued
As he said that, he raised his hand and touched Mo Xiyan's forehead, and after looking at her expression carefully, he continued, "Looking at your complexion, it is indeed haggard. Although it is not burning, I will call the doctor to come over and take a look." - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
*her mouth
"How can there be no one here!?" "I clearly …" Li mama let out a surprised cry, but the moment the words reached his mouth, they disappeared under Madame Prime Minister's sinister gaze. - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
accepted *his* ex-wife's
Although he married her into his family once again, it was still true that he had betrayed her for more than ten years. The most valuable thing was that not only did she not care about his kindness, she even magnanimously accepted her ex-wife's daughter, Mo Xiyan. - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
shook *her* head, *she* turned
"Wait." Madame Prime Minister shook his head, he turned and said to the butler, "The butler has ordered the servants to disperse, it is enough for you and the Li mama to be here." - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
when 1st introduced in last chapter his name was Yuening, but now it's Yue Ning. was it spelled incorrectly all of chapter 3? or is it misspelled this chapter?
After Yue Ning gnawed through two steamed corn breads, he was still a bit hungry, but with the grain bin at home nearly empty and the remaining supplies dwindling, he needed to eat sparingly. - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
*his eyes *his face *He invited
"Don't mind them, they're just rough guys with no manners," Parfit said, her eyes red, but a smile on her face. She happily invited Kestrel to check out the room they had prepared for her. - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
cleared *his* throat
Parfit, standing behind Kestrel, cleared her throat loudly, and the alphas quickly pulled their hands back. The last time a beta visited them, she was scared off by their half-beast forms. - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
alpha in front of *her
Kestrel found that the alpha in front of him had a powerful body and incredible fighting skills. Most importantly, he could keep up with every little shift in her mental state. It was like they were swimming in the sea together, not needing words, each feeling the other's small thoughts through the waves. He could feel and act with powerful skill, as if he could read her mind. - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
ask *her* classmate
Kestrel wanted to seriously ask his classmate what feeling bummed was like, but she knew she shouldn't. - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
😂😂😂
Chen Gong smiled faintly: "It's the bullfrog's 'bull'!" - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
thought it said in an earlier chapter that she was 27 yrs old
"I'm only 26 years old!"