... Thank you!

Symbolism. Marco's the lost soul.

This is a great novel. It's very perceptive and the storyline is awesome. The writing is simple, but a little too simple, so personally I'd prefer a bit of description. But it's really easy to read. The MC has an amusing personality and the world building is pretty vivid. Wonderful work!

Sympathetic Person: What were his last words? Relative (sobbing): He...(gulps and weeps hard) he sighed... Sympathetic Person: ... At least make your last words valuable, mate.

You have succeeded in making me feel worthless. Without uttering a word. That's a new record. Very insightful, though.

It's all good. The chapter was great, the writing was great, characters were awesome. Thank you for lighting up my week and I hope you feel amazing soon :)

I just--I can't even--how perfect is this? How much more Tito Charles can you get? That "...do whatever." is amazing, tho.

Thanks a lot for the honest review. I am not offended at all and I appreciate your frankness. I have just stated the reason for my heavy description in the synopsis. Hope you understand :)

Hey, thanks a lot for trying my novel and giving a helpful review. There is a reason for the long paragraphs and description and I have just mentioned it in the synopsis as this is an issue being pointed out by many readers. I'll try to edit them and make them better. Thanks again :)

This is a great novel. The storyline and characters are well described but the writing quality can be vastly improved. The pacing is fast and the plot is quite engaging. The only problem are the minor grammatical mistakes, and if they can be improved, the work would become out class. But, aside from that, amazing work, Author.

Thanks a lot for your honest review, Kami!

This is a pretty great novel! From the unique plot to the amazing description of each Zodiac sign, it kept me glued to my screen. There are some minor grammatical errors, but the idea and storyline of the novel are different and extremely interesting. Every character has their own personality and the explanation of this new, magic-filled world is quite intriguing. Overall, it's very well thought out. Fantastic work, Author! :)

This is a really promising novel. The writing quality is okay but attention to detail is pretty high class. The formation of characters is great and the plot is unique. The pacing of the story is slightly fast but it keeps the reader hooked in. Overall, great job!

This chapter represents how people have hidden their pasts behind their bright smiles. Dacron, who I thought as amusing and entertaining, has a deep, apparently dark, past that haunts him. He's not exactly a lost soul, but he is confused on the inside despite pretending that he's not. Be kind to EVERYONE, but especially the ones that light up the world through their small actions because their smiles show that they're better at bearing the weight of their past.

I love the mannerisms of each character...it symbolizes their personality quite well. Dacron and Cooper are usually care-free and amusing, as shown in, well, every conversation. Tito Charles is caring, but protective, shown through the "harsh pat" Marco gets. Marco is lost, shown in his random behavior and inability to process his replies and concentrate on himself. Very well done, mate.

Beautifully written. This is a nice representation of that feeling when you're surrounded by people and nature, but there's a faint aura of solitude hanging around you. Yet, somehow, it doesn't feel bad, it's more of a rare bittersweet realization that not everyone is a lost soul, and even if you don't know the way, you only have to keep looking because the world is ready to guide you. I hope this makes sense. 😶

:'(

I have been gifted with the spirit of Dacron...cuz this is just very relatable.

My mother when I say sorry after breaking the 6th expensive plate in the house.