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No you don't a vampire, you're talking to one, you need a warewolf from Fireblood.
The plot keeps you on your toes, and the characters have interesting personalities. However, in this book, all the good characters are gay. the straight one are: a monster, a psycho, an asshole, a true bitch, a vampire who'll even suck a whole deer dry, then start sipping on blood everywhere she goes as it were wine, another ruthless and truly vicious vampire, the vampire king. Also, the homosexual sex scenes are much more elaborate and vivid than the straight ones, so if you Never seen so many typos, grammar and syntax mistakes all in one book...please proofread, I'll do it for free!
wait. Ava is in Salvatore talking to Even a and the next line she's with Ryden back in the pack?!?I think you skipped s few lines here.
Out of all the people, Lavander should know better than to not believe someone who cares for him. He should listen to Jayden's instinct, just like with Lily everyone though he was the one overthinking.
Lavander is an id10t. She told him she's coming back for him while he's in a relationship with Jayden that must remain secret!! With Claudia around, she might find out and expose them.
Hu? Who told what to whom?
Lily told him, not Ava. What a mess!
Again! It's Lavander talking now, not Jayden.
I don't think Lavander is gay, though.
I knew it!!! I knew Jayden was in love with Lavander, and that's why Lavander told him to stop visiting him in the hut.
Ever since Lavander met her, not Ryder. Proofreading!!! Look, I do it professionally, I'll do it for free .
Dante? Proofreading !!!
Author, you didn't do you research. Warewolves don't take 8 nor 9 months for their pregnancies. It's in every single warewolf novel!
It's normal for them not to trust Ryden, but since it's a magic potion why not tell the aunt who deals with herbs, or better yet Evana?
Again, wrong choice. The idiot should have spoken to Harrison. Once he finds out she kept this hidden from him, he'll be furioso with her. Sincerity is simply not ìn this girl's chords.