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Vale23

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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    No you don't a vampire, you're talking to one, you need a warewolf from Fireblood.

    "There is no need for arguments. Dante, the guards already searched Salvatore and didn't find him. So instead of wasting precious time, we will head to Fireblood and begin our search, besides we still need a vampire to join the team. And we will get one at Fireblood" Reni explained to Dante as he tried to calm the both of them down.
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    Fantasy · WinwritePawat_555
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    The plot keeps you on your toes, and the characters have interesting personalities. However, in this book, all the good characters are gay. the straight one are: a monster, a psycho, an asshole, a true bitch, a vampire who'll even suck a whole deer dry, then start sipping on blood everywhere she goes as it were wine, another ruthless and truly vicious vampire, the vampire king. Also, the homosexual sex scenes are much more elaborate and vivid than the straight ones, so if you Never seen so many typos, grammar and syntax mistakes all in one book...please proofread, I'll do it for free!

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    Fantasy · WinwritePawat_555
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    Evens not Evans

    Ch 143 Thank you for loving me
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    Fantasy · WinwritePawat_555
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    wait. Ava is in Salvatore talking to Even a and the next line she's with Ryden back in the pack?!?I think you skipped s few lines here.

    "Ava, what are you doing here? I thought you left." he asked sleepily. 
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    Fantasy · WinwritePawat_555
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    Out of all the people, Lavander should know better than to not believe someone who cares for him. He should listen to Jayden's instinct, just like with Lily everyone though he was the one overthinking.

    "Jayden.... She is a sweet girl and she is my friend. Could you please give her a chance and get along with her. Pleaseeeee, Jay. Please." Lavender begged earnestly giving Jayden his best puppy dog look. 
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    How is everybody gay or cockhold in this pack?

    Ch 71 Angry Jax
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    Lavander is an id10t. She told him she's coming back for him while he's in a relationship with Jayden that must remain secret!! With Claudia around, she might find out and expose them.

    "me too." Lavender added.
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Hu? Who told what to whom?

    "I will, thanks Dreya." Dustin said gratefully.
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    Fantasy · WinwritePawat_555
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Lily told him, not Ava. What a mess!

    Ryder sighed, he was this close to punching Jax. He tried to rein in his temper.
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Again! It's Lavander talking now, not Jayden.

    "I don't know what you two are fighting about, but I want you to make up with him. Do you understand?"
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    I don't think Lavander is gay, though.

    Jayden just lay down beside Ryder quietly, he didn't know what to say because he couldn't understand his own emotions too. How could he tell Ryder that he always felt jealous seeing Lavender and Claudia together or that just know when he saw them kissing, his heart had broke into tiny pieces and he had wished that he was the one Lavender was kissing.
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    I knew it!!! I knew Jayden was in love with Lavander, and that's why Lavander told him to stop visiting him in the hut.

    Jayden just lay down beside Ryder quietly, he didn't know what to say because he couldn't understand his own emotions too. How could he tell Ryder that he always felt jealous seeing Lavender and Claudia together or that just know when he saw them kissing, his heart had broke into tiny pieces and he had wished that he was the one Lavender was kissing.
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Ever since Lavander met her, not Ryder. Proofreading!!! Look, I do it professionally, I'll do it for free .

    "Ever since Ryder met her, he has become very secretive. I don't think this girl has good intentions towards him yet he pays no attention to my warnings."
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Dante? Proofreading !!!

    "let's say she did, would you apologize?" Dante asked her. 
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Author, you didn't do you research. Warewolves don't take 8 nor 9 months for their pregnancies. It's in every single warewolf novel!

    "Yes, in eight months time, you are going to be Uncle Ryder"
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    It's normal for them not to trust Ryden, but since it's a magic potion why not tell the aunt who deals with herbs, or better yet Evana?

    "We have to tell Ryder about this." Ava said excitedly, she was so happy, Ryder would forgive her now, she thought to herself.
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Posted

    Some situations are way too far fetched, as is the younger sister's character, which makes the story less believable, but the rest is a fun, enticing plot, and the characters are well versed. Needs some proofreading.

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    He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    How can I select the chapter I want to read? The App always brings me back to chap. 1

    Ch 13 Shadow Wolves
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
    Commented

    Maybe if Jaiden had told the alpha he knew where the whereabouts of their friend were, the guy would have been restored to the pack.

    Ch 10 Lavender Flowers
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  • Vale23
    Vale232mth
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    Again, wrong choice. The idiot should have spoken to Harrison. Once he finds out she kept this hidden from him, he'll be furioso with her. Sincerity is simply not ìn this girl's chords.

    With that said, without waiting for any response from me, Alexander, who had already achieved his goal, immediately hung up the phone.
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    Return with the Alpha's Secret Baby
    Fantasy · FancyZ
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