Thanksfor the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

In terms of writing, you are slightly above average, but in terms of developing the story, you are good and continue with steadfastness and a little good character design. He looks more like an ordinary trainee than a hero of the story, but I think you will change him after he gets out of the abyss. In general, this is my current assessment. I wish you success and continue on. Create chapters. [img=coins]

Thanks for chp

Thanks for chp

Thanks for chp

Good work in terms of writing, characters and events. As for the background of the world, it is also okay. It is a perfect novel of my favorite type, so I hope to raise the chapters quickly Very very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍