i think you might have spelled the "was peace and" the wrong way....cause u wrote "wa soeace wnd" instead of "was peace and".I hope i didn't offend you in any way cause this is just a friendly comment from me.....ฅ'ω'ฅAnd i just wanna tell you that your story is so AWESOME!!.

Your welcome.I am glad that you didn't mind me pointing out your mistake.ฅ'ω'ฅ.

this part here i think you might have forgotten to put hard....cause you wrote "it wasn't that right?" instead of "it wasn't that hard right?".....ik this is just a minor mistake and mind i don't really mind about it but some people do so.....yeah.^ω^.

Love the artsyle.The story is great too and I really love how the mc always figured out a way to save the city but i just can't believe that he's a perv.He would have look so cool if he's not one tho....btw this is one of my favs story so far.≧ω≦.