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blackrose0231

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Simple African girl who loves to write and read♥

2021-07-12 JoinedGlobal
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Drone_dome

    Thanks !

    Her hair was a bird nest except no birds lived inside. They couldn't. I for one think that Zuri's dark and powerful magic would instantly kill any bird trying to live off on her hair.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Drone_dome

    Lol yes. Why?

    Her hair was a bird nest except no birds lived inside. They couldn't. I for one think that Zuri's dark and powerful magic would instantly kill any bird trying to live off on her hair.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Drone_dome

    Thanks so much for your comment. I'll be sure to be more detailed next chapters! I'm sorry for the confusion.

    Ch 4 4. The Boy From Jiya.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
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    I want to visit this Island now.

    The Fionna Island - the fairy tale island, so pristine and breathtaking that if god ever lost theirs, this will become their new heaven. Out of this world! Beautiful as fiction! Unique and as intriguing every passing second. The beauty of the flora and fauna of this entirely different world is beyond words. The quantity of colors over here, the amount of life every particle of it has! Untouched! Located far away from the sight of human eyes and beyond human imagination. It is home to many million new and varied species that are yet to be discovered and known. It is the place where wildest weathers turn merry, where the violent tides turn tranquil, where trees grow, flowers bloom, and different lives flourish together peacefully. Even the air has its own aura. The Fionna Island is one of a kind. Like a hill station surrounded by protective waters and shaded by clouds, guarding the secrets of its beauty and purity from the evil world.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Commented

    Oh wow. This is such a lovely description. Plus an intriguing opening line.

    Amidst the most violent tides and guarded by wildest weathers all the time, an area of the ocean that is so harsh and wild and deadly that would horrify even the greatest of the sailors. Surrounded by such conventionally deadly and hopeless water bodies, beneath the fluffy clouds, filled with mysteries, lies an island – The Fionna Island.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
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    Oh wow. I haven't read this book yet because I just read it's blurb and I must say... It was so compelling! I have to read it now. Okay, heading on to chapter one!

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Donutsaurio

    Thanks!

    Ch 1 1. The Prophecy.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Twilight_1208

    Thanks so much!

    Ch 1 1. The Prophecy.
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Posted

    Can I just say this ,Clarissa is so lovely lol. I like her already. This story is bound to flourish. I haven't even read much of the book and I love it already. Great work from this author.

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Commented

    That's nice

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Commented

    I love the name Clarissa

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Posted

    This is a fantastic piece of writing. I love how the author neatly arranged their words, carefully placing each punctuation marks at the right place. Great work from the author. You don't want to miss out on this intriguing novel.

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Donutsaurio

    Ohhh

    "Fufu, call me Rebecca."
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Donutsaurio

    Oh okay

    -??? POV-
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Mari_Angel_Pain_Wr

    Thank you so so much! It means a lot to hear this. Thanks for your compliment!

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Posted

    This is a lovely piece of work. Yes, I'm not so much a fan of stories like this, but I have to give praise to the author. You made me enjoy the story even from the very first chapter. Although, I got a bit confused from the switching of Povs, and there were a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but with a little editing, this story is bound to flourish. Great work.

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Replied to Donutsaurio

    Thanks for the comment. I'll be sure to make edits soon!

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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Commented

    What's her name?

    -Black-haired girl POV-
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Commented

    It was a lovely chapter and I love the mysteries and suspense. I have a comment though, why switch between Povs? It seemed a bit confusing Perhaps a third person Pov could be great, don't you think so?

    Ch 1 1 - The beginning
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  • blackrose0231
    blackrose02311yr
    Commented

    Who's fufu?

    "Fufu, call me Rebecca."
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