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ArgoTheSkywing18hCommentedThey better keep Arbok and Wheezing, would make sense considering they’d have more Pokémon to fight the Tyranitar with.
This was Jessie and James- ArgoTheSkywing1dReplied to Katsu39
Honestly if you plan to do multiple girls, for starters, all within 2 years of Ash’s age or less please, and secondly, no more than 2 of 3, because at that point it is just women collecting. And honestly, I like Serena being an overprotective sister type rather than his lover, so please have that be the case. Besides Ash has a lot of good female travel companions he could end up with instead of gym leaders and such. I’d still probably prefer just one or even none for romance, but I feel the above is a good idea, any more and it becomes a hassle, plus annoying to write I imagine.
Now that you receive an extra chapter I demand stones - ArgoTheSkywing1dReplied to Katsu39
Also, eventually when you get to about 300-500 chapters, maybe you could go back and do some early chapter rewrites to make them flow better and more match the later chapters in quality?
"Well, would you like to come with me?" Ash asked, making Machop look up, "I can help you get stronger and you can make some more friends, what do you think?" - ArgoTheSkywing1dReplied to Shubham_Singh_7856
It does get a lot better in later chapters
"Well, would you like to come with me?" Ash asked, making Machop look up, "I can help you get stronger and you can make some more friends, what do you think?" - ArgoTheSkywing1dReplied to Katsu39
Inferno, Incinerator Drive, and Immolation. I think any of those would be good name replacements.
[Ability: Chlorophyll, Hidden Ability: Thick fat] - ArgoTheSkywing3dCommented
Cannon -> canyon
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Thanks man
"Well anyway the sunset, we should be able to find the lighthouse soon," Ash said as they looked for the lights of the Lighthouse. - ArgoTheSkywing3dCommented
4 should be 5, Pikachu, Abra, Clefairy, Bulbasaur and Squirtle
"Well I have these 4 out now, but most of my other Pokemon are sleeping, and the rest are in Professor Oak's ranch." Ash said with the half-truth, but he knew what Bill would ask so he chose his words carefully to change the direction of the conversion, "Actually he gave me permission to carry more than 6 Pokemon." - ArgoTheSkywing4dCommented
Also, dunno if you'll be down to, but when it comes to scenes where a specific place and such is mentioned, could you include a pic or something along those lines? I barely remember anything from the parts of the anime I did watch, and I do not remember watching this episode of Kanto at all, and I don't even remember most of the Kanto episodes I did watch when I was like 5-10 or whenever it was I watched them.
"Well anyway the sunset, we should be able to find the lighthouse soon," Ash said as they looked for the lights of the Lighthouse. - ArgoTheSkywing4dCommented
…Was this Abra foreshadowing I just realize?
So over time, Ash used aura to slowly start the healing of Bulbasaur's bulb, if this was some bad cultivation story this could be considered fixing one's mana core cliche. - ArgoTheSkywing4dReplied to ArgoTheSkywing
Well, I have watched some Kanto till when Charizard got injured and healed and such, and Hoenn, but I BARELY remember anything from those.
"Anabel, age 14, appeared a few years ago with amnesia, found unconscious on the beaches of Alola taken in by Looker and Nanu, a Fallers with minor psychic powers, did I get that right?" - ArgoTheSkywing4dReplied to Katsu39
Ah gotcha, only Pokémon series I watched fully was XYZ, so that might be why, I can barely remember any of the other series, and haven’t watched anything after XYZ
"Anabel, age 14, appeared a few years ago with amnesia, found unconscious on the beaches of Alola taken in by Looker and Nanu, a Fallers with minor psychic powers, did I get that right?" - ArgoTheSkywing4dCommented
Fallers?
"Anabel, age 14, appeared a few years ago with amnesia, found unconscious on the beaches of Alola taken in by Looker and Nanu, a Fallers with minor psychic powers, did I get that right?" - ArgoTheSkywing5dReplied to _APOCALYPSE_
That he’s fine?
"Psy-sy-ys-sy ╮(. ¯ ﹏ ¯.)╭" Psyduck said, he was fine since MIsty insisted on giving him Headache medicine. - ArgoTheSkywing5dCommented"Alright let's make this quick," Ash said as Pikachu humped in front of him.
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IM GOING TO BE OUTLAWED IN EVERY COUNTRY!!!
"Like what the Geneva Convention, more like Geneva Suggestion," Ash said - ArgoTheSkywing5dCommented
Is it supposed to be or?
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Also, I do want Ash to end up with both Mewtwos, with them chilling around and technically captured in either 2 master balls or just poke ball types of their choosing. I mainly could see them agreeing to it due to him helping them out, which I imagine he plans to do, plus if you’ve seen either of the 2 main mew and mewtwo comics you know the idea I’m going for with this.
"But now it is time for the meat and potatoes, according to our scientists Project Mew is nearing its final stages, however there is no guarantee that we will be able to make it submit, now we have two options and I really don't want to do the second one, so we will be doing the first." - ArgoTheSkywing6dReplied to Katsu39
Then it gets even more op, like that mutation is if Charizard was trained by the three without them being the original dragon. There’s an image of the original dragon that’s fan made as a hydra, and now it’s a head cannon that Reshiram, Zekron, and Kyurem are actually the seperated parts of the original dragon, which was a hydra with 3 seperate beings making it up, those beings being the above mentioned dragons.
Ch 141 A Evolution Cult...