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Prince_Arsalan17hCommentedneed more chapters.....i like this story .... its a new type of story.... also i like mc's powers
I would like to hear your thoughts on this book. Are you enjoying it so far? Also, is the quality of the writing readable? Are there any grammar mistakes or issues that are hindering your reading experience? Your feedback will not only assist me but also enhance your enjoyment of the story. If there are any aspects of the story that you're not fond of, please let me know so I can address them. Constructive criticism is valuable and will help me improve the story. I encourage you all to read a few more chapters, as I believe this story has a lot of potential and is quite engaging. Thank you for your time and feedback.- Prince_Arsalan11dReplied to Rapid_Cougar_3
they are not mc for a reason
A tight red long-sleeve T-shirt paired with black baggy pants. There was also a black coat on his shoulders which he was using as a cloak. - Prince_Arsalan22dCommented
this
1)Uchiha - Prince_Arsalan22dPosted
can't make heads or tails of this .... what is this story about ? the only thing I understood that mc has nerfed time stone power and he tried to time reversed only to time travel to a point in past but I still can't understand what is happening .... and most annoying is what time is the present story happened or which year mc got transmigrated .... there is no world building at all .... i am dropping this .
- Prince_Arsalan23dPosted
i truly do not want to give this a single star .... it does not deserve a star... its like its THEIR nature to copy and try to ruin every product in the world with chep and low quality meterial.... they don't even spare the novels with their shitty translation apps
detailI'm in Food Wars, I've Been Invincible After Signing In For Ten Years!Anime & Comics · 1323414 - Prince_Arsalan25dCommented
oo come on .... really ? sanji ?... what's next ? .. gum gum no jett bazukaaaaaaa !!! ?
"...I am Vinsmoke Sanji..." He bowed. Alexander's eyes Widnes as he heard that name before, and it was a very familiar name too - Prince_Arsalan25dCommented
this is the best starting plot i have read in a while ..... why it is u ask?.... because here villain will get punishment and the loved one get atleast a little bit of comfort that they have gotten revenge .... i don't know about others but I like this start.....
Ch 1 The Golden Hands - Prince_Arsalan25dCommented
wow .... this is the first story where mc cant't get his own women ... has to relay on a wish.... he is forching a love on a women who won't love him if not for the fact that she is bound by a wish.... why not ask for few female slave.... at least you get few more
"my first wish Is that I will be immune to the effects of all types of kryptonite, and red sun as well, I don't want the chance of someone messing with my head like Joker did to injustice superman. Second I wish to have a Lois Lane in that world as well, I will meet her eventually but what is superman without his Lois Lane?" - Prince_Arsalan25dCommented
there are few fanfiction authors that knows what his readers don't like but still do those things
"Henry Cavill's superman, only I wish the suit t be with the red trunks, an internet concept artist by the name Javier Sanchez, a.k.a JScomicart had created a suit for him that I believe works best." I then think of the image, and it appears on the table Infront of 'Christopher Lloyd', it is taken from batman v superman when superman walks into the court, but then he has his famous trunks, his 'S' is more like the comic version and his hair is curlier. - Prince_Arsalan27dCommented
+1
°None of the above - Prince_Arsalan1mthPosted
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too much forced plot ... the bomb had sensors
"Yes, you can but All Might won't be able to see you doing that meaning we can't pass the test if you touch the bomb. If you take your gloves in then Tenya will see you. - Prince_Arsalan1mthCommented
it does not look good that's for sure
"It looks good on you," Asui said as Toru also arrived and looked at the bulging muscles in his tight red shirt. Let alone girls even boys gave two looks at it. - Prince_Arsalan1mthCommented[Something similar to Metal Bat from One Punch Man]
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